Realm of Westerheim

Reyo

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#4
It's a decent concept but definitely needs some work. Some sentences don't make sense and you slipped in on some errors here and there.

I suggest you revise this and produce something better.
 

Mushii

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#5
It's a decent concept but definitely needs some work. Some sentences don't make sense and you slipped in on some errors here and there.

I suggest you revise this and produce something better.
Yeah, I'll edit some stuff and yeah PM me the main errors.
 
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